warriorscribe: (I wish to know about everything)
Enoch ([personal profile] warriorscribe) wrote in [personal profile] sageprincess 2013-07-03 03:49 am (UTC)

Shouldn't that part in the last paragraph be "...as he's the one with the keys you need. Be careful. There is information everywhere..."?

Also, "Not everything is as fake as it seems" feels to me like it belongs at the beginning of the last paragraph, since the next sentence seems to indicate that their powers aren't wholly illusion.

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