sageprincess: (Ocarina of Time)
Zelda ([personal profile] sageprincess) wrote2021-03-04 01:29 pm
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How's my driving? Am I doing this princess the justice she deserves? Feel free to leave me concrit and I'll do what I can to improve!
unidentify: obligatory snark says no though (let me ponder on that)

[personal profile] unidentify 2013-06-08 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
In light of something that only came to me after writing this up- it occurs to me I've been using "the resistance" and "pandora" interchangeably. Maybe you could also make it clear that Pandora is "a resistance," not "The Resistance" some... how...